the tainted eyes behind the sun
the flowers on the tower run
the ledges down the flowers frown
the showers rain the hours down
the crinkles in the cracks bring dawn
the wrinkles in the silent gone
my lawn and I bask till night
then silent prayers until the light
R.I.P.
I love you so much
Aww. I love you girl! BFFL
ReplyDeletenice poem
ReplyDeletegood stuff here man
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing!
ReplyDeletecool, can't wait for an update
ReplyDeletewow, good to know
ReplyDeleteHmm I that kind of felt like a happy poem to me :/
ReplyDeleteI am not very good at poetry though; my only analyses coem from what is at face value. Like when I see flowers, the sun, rain, and my lawn, all I can think of is summer and happy thoughts :D
Sorry if it was a sad poem and I ruined the mood :(
dan, i didnt specifically say who it was for because i like when people interpret the words for themselves. you didnt ruin it at all!
ReplyDeletewhat a unique post!
ReplyDeleteI like your blog a lot!
ReplyDeletedeep poem
ReplyDeleteyou've got some very interesting thoughts
ReplyDeleteSweet!
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ReplyDeletethis is great XD
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